Originally Posted by imunique
congos Ryan..u deserve to win Bro..

fab work with visual delight

Thanks,Di.

I hope you liked it. The message in your story was

too.
Originally Posted by heathcliff
Hmmm..Ma'am...

Saved you for the last.
Thanks a lot.

I dont know if i deserved to win,but if you ask me, it was your story that creeped my out the most.The surrealism in your story was bypassed by none other. It came closest to being a real life nightmare. And the open ending only added to the creepiness of the story. Along with that, your way of narration, the impeccable choice of words, only heightened the overall effect.Something that i was trying to achieve,at length, in those intense situations in my story, but failed miserably due to my amateurish writing skills.
Many said, that i left a lot of questions unanswered in the story.Yes,i did,and i am sorry.

But,it was that very reason in your story, that i liked it so much.It leaves a lot of questions in the mind,and makes you think.IMO,that adds to the creepiness of the story.Maybe i like that approach,while others would prefer a conclusion at the end of the story.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story,as much as that of others.

Please,keep writing.

You are too good with words.
