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|  | | |  | Auribus Teneo LupumThis is a discussion on Auribus Teneo Lupum within the Horror Story Contest forums, part of the BookWorm category; Great story Yammy!
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17 Mar 09, 08:37 PM
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 Great story Yammy!  twist in end! ---------------------------------------------- |
17 Mar 09, 08:38 PM
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Btw, may be I understood it wrong.
What is the twist that you'll are talking about?  
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17 Mar 09, 08:42 PM
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A last line twist.........read the last line! |
17 Mar 09, 08:54 PM
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Yammy, i don't think i meant "It Sucks" 
I just think the idea was brilliant but it didn't deliver the punches when it mattered. It was like a Champion never KO'ed boxer taking the ring against an amateur, having all the right ideas of when and how to deliver the KO but it never came and the fight ended with a win for the champion on points
Great idea that i think a cut in words didn't come out that well
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17 Mar 09, 09:17 PM
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Originally Posted by Safin  Yammy, i don't think i meant "It Sucks"
I just think the idea was brilliant but it didn't deliver the punches when it mattered. It was like a Champion never KO'ed boxer taking the rink against an amateur, having all the right ideas of when and how to deliver the KO but it never came and the fight ended with a win for the champion on points
Great idea that i think a cut in words didn't come out that well I was only kidding. 
Yup, I agree that my idea of a non-resolution lacked the KO effect. Blame it on my experiments with surreal fiction, where the boundary between real and fiction does not exist. 
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17 Mar 09, 09:20 PM
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I went thought the whole story...but the fact is that i found it a bit off toipc...as it got a bit derailled from the so called 'Horror' theme.
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17 Mar 09, 09:23 PM
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^ You missed the horror part
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20 Mar 09, 03:13 PM
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after reading the first para, i was so bored that i didnt feel like going next |
25 Mar 09, 05:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Severus after reading the first para, i was so bored that i didnt feel like going next It's alright. Nothing to be ashamed of, really! Not everyone is intellectually inclined enough for a keen interest in literature.
Go back to tending to your cows and pigs.
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25 Mar 09, 06:18 PM
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