Fearfull thoughts

Gopal slowly opened his eyes, he is very weak and doesn’t have strength to utter a single word..he looked all sides to someones help, in the meantime his mother came and saw that Gopal opened his eyes, immediately she called up everyone with a bright smile on his face..
‘hey, see…..awwwww Gopal opened his eyes”
listening her words everyone in the house came quickly and asked Gopal.’.how r u feeling now.Gopal’
But he was feeling like he went into some deep sleep and woke up after ages..He was unable to say anyone about his present status..
He slowly looked at the calender which was hanged over to the wall.. that showing October 17th..
‘october 17?” he questioned himself with confused state,.he thought again himself.’i remember august 10th date so what ? I am on this bed since from that day?’.He was horrified with that thought for a moment..He slowly started recollecting about the day August 10th..

That was a Rainy day..He and his bunch of friends was planning for a better place to gamble.All r in teen age and always hide from parents eye sight to Gamble..so on that day they planned to play in the mid night in a old school which was closed since from years..All have come into one conclusion and fixed the time as 12.30.

the village is quite silent .Gopal slowly got up from the bed and wore his shoes , then he opened the door and came out of the house..He slowly walked on the road to reach the school..No one is looking on the road except Dogs with dazzling eyes . He got little fear inside .Finally he reached the school.. he has looked all the sides for his friends whether they come or not.No one have come yet, he decided to wait for his friends inside the school..He entered and shocked for a moment seeing the horrifying scene there.
A group of unknown people wearing white cloths and looking indifferent to humans have sit and discussing in freaking voices .
The only thing his mind said for the last time was..they r ghosts and I have seen them.He turned back with shocked expression and how he reached home even he did not know..
And it’s been 2 months he is on the bed from that time..
Gopal came out of his thoughts and looked at everyone who r keenly watching for his reply .He slowly folded his legs and covered his head with blanket.

The end

PS: fear makes people to think in any extent..Be strong to face any…
It’s a real life story ,happened in my uncles life .

nice short story with a message

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prongs's Signature:

Scary indeed

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The optimist proclaims that we live in the best of all possible worlds;
and the pessimist fears this is true

Nice little story.

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You could have elaborated a little more. But decent effort.

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My Rating : 1.5/5

Nice story,di.

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Nice Message

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cute little message

Enjoyed the read... I read word for word....Thank you