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nice effort there agnel

A lovely read well done...

does it have just 1000 words???

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Bro...

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heathcliff's Signature:

Good Story there Agnel....The narration was upto the mark & screenplay was brilliant
you could have used more gore to show her pain and elongated those 5 mins till midnight a bit more to make it interesting although this one was great too

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xXx's Signature:

awesome Agni.. narration is just superb..

Thanks for patiently reading and appreciating!

A bit more than that... why are you asking?

Anand, mine was a last minute entry, thought about the plot and wrote it in 3-4 hours and had to finish it. I tried googling to describe the gore part, but couldn't find any good resource :dunno.

I'm planning to write a refined version with a different ending

Will share it soon
Thanks for your comments manager

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Agnel's Signature:

story Agnel!
Nice narration and well end!

Thanks for reading and also for your comments

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