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 Old 23 Oct 07, 11:24 AM
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This was the Day.

Tony had been waiting for this day for his entire life. He had his share of
sorrow all through his life but now the moment waited him which would change
his life forever. He was 22 and had seen so much in these years. He never
knew what a mother's warmth was. She died giving birth to him. Soon after
her death his Dad started seeing other women. Tony hailed from a very rich
and prestigious family with generations having served the poor through the
medical fraternity. Everyone was a doctor or a PHD but not his dad. His dad
didn't take up the medical profession, in fact never tried to earn a penny.

Tony had a lonely childhood until Jane entered his life. He could still
remember the day when Jane moved to his neighbourhood.He had found a true
fried in her. Jane’s company covered all his sorrows, he stated smiling,
laughing and more importantly enjoying his life. And now he was going to ask
her to marry him. This was his last day of college and he had been preparing
for this moment for a while now. He had visualized the scene a hundred times
in his dreams.” Will you marry me Miss Jane?" He had memorized this simple
plain line.

As he was waiting for Jane in his garden he heard Uncle Jack calling him.
Uncle Jack was the one who looked after him for all these years. Mr. Jack
was a Psychologist. He was very dear to Tony. "Can I speak to you for some
time, Tony?” "Now? Actually Uncle ..." Before Tony could complete his
statement uncle jack said "Tony this is really very important. I always
wanted to speak to you about this but was afraid. Now you are older and you
will be able to understand...”

"What is it all about...” Tony asked with a tensed voice. "Not here... Let’s
go inside the living room and will have a talk there" Tony followed Uncle
Jack into the cottage. Tony was very anxious and nervous. He had never seen
his Uncle this way. "Tony before I talk to u about it please promise me you
won’t panic and whatever happens always remember that I am with you." "God!
You are making me too nervous. Tell me uncle jack what is it about”. Tony
wanted to get through this as early as possible. "Jane must be waiting for
me" he thought.

"Tony you need to keep your calm. Know it will be very tough for you to
understand..Tony, remember the day when you told me about Jane moving to the
cottage next to ours?"

"Is it about Jane...?" he shrieked, his heart was pumping fast...

"Listen Tony There is no one living in that cottage for years now...”

"whhhat ?? How’s that possible I have been there myself so many
times....what are you talking about? I just can’t understand"

"Please listen Tony. You were alone those days and were very upset with
life. You didn’t have friends then...You went through lot of things...You
wanted to be happy but were unable to you didn't had anyone to talk to"
Uncle jack moved closer to Tony and put his hand on Tony's shoulder. "And in
such situations your brain plays bad games with you. You started imagining
Jane as your friend...There is no Jane; Tony you are just imagining her..."

"Just just just imagining her...how can you say that ...I have touched her
even kissed her cheeks. It’s you who are crazy and not me...”

"Tony I know it’s hard to believe this. But it’s the truth. I always wanted
to tell you this but you were too small to understand..." "No that's not
possible.....you are lying ..." "No son it’s your own mind lying
you...please Tony keep your cool everything will be fine ...just trust me"

Tony rushed away from the living room. He ran to meet Jane in the Garden.
But no one was there. He went to Jane's house hoping to find her there...he
tried ringing the door bell but it didn't rang and how would it? The place
was locked for 17 years now. He entered the Cottage through a broken
window.Eveything was deserted. The sofa on which he and Jane sat chatting
for hours was covered with layers of dust...

He was almost crying now...he moved to the terrace to find the rose plant
they planted together. There was nothing only some rusted furniture and
dust. He went back Uncle Jack. "Son, I am sorry but you need to get out of
this...” Tony couldn't believe what had happened to him. The girl who he
loved the most and wanted to marry didn't exist. She was fake, a thought,
and a piece of imagination....

It took around a month for him to digest his fate. He was finally
recovering. And that day before going to sleep he took those tablets which
he took for last 15 years. He always wondered why Uncle Jack kept giving him
those tablets. Now he knew the answer. He was sick. Sick mentally.

As he was about to sleep he heard a knock on his door.

It was Jane.

"Jane you cant be here...you don't exist..."

"What’s that? Is this some kind of Joke, Tony? I came here to say sorry. I
had to leave that day without informing you because my mom died in a car
accident...I tried to reach you but somehow I was not able to...”

"Noooo! this is not true” said Tony. "There is no one called Jane in my
life...I know that now...Just get away from me... "

"Whats the matter with you Tony? I am Jane your sweetheart your love...”

"No that’s not true...." Tony closed his eyes for a moment hoping his dream
would end....

Jane held his hand....Tony was shivering he could feel the touch.His brain
was playing Bad games with him he knew it.

"Come here my baby you are not well...you need some rest"

"Go away from me ...just go...” Tony was breathing high now...He tried
keeping his cool and took a deep breath. He knew this would be over once he
convinced himself that there was no Jane.

"Jane you are my imagination...I made you..."

"Tony you can’t hurt me ...you love me so much ...we had such a great time
together"

"No Jane, I had a great time with myself..." What am I talking! I am going
nuts..

He rushed into the kitchen. He came back with water all over his shirt... He
could still see Jane standing there...weeping.

He was well aware of the bad games of the Brain now. He went closer to
her... "Jane i made you ...now i will destroy you...” Zap zap zap... three
stabs...Jane was bleeding... Tony could feel the red liquid ...bad brain
games he thought...

"Uncle Jack. Where are you? I am cured now. There will be no Jane from now
on...where are you Uncle Jack?"

"There is no Uncle Jack. I wanted to tell you this… All these days..." Jane
gasped.

Breathing her last breath.

Sorry this was the story of saawariya
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Brilliant !!!

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 Old 23 Oct 07, 11:41 AM
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This is good but not fun

This shud b placed in some other section
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Its the story of a poor old Schizophrenic guy & how can u keep it in here?
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 Old 23 Oct 07, 11:53 AM
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 Old 23 Oct 07, 12:01 PM
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 Old 23 Oct 07, 12:25 PM
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Originally Posted by stridEr View Post
This shud b placed in some other section
Not under Joker's club plz

Plz mods hv a look
Here's 2 things for ya:
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 Old 23 Oct 07, 10:16 PM
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